Twoku:
Petals preparing / pink and purple pendulous / pregnant with purpose.
The “twoku” is actually the original, first-thing-to-pop-out-of-my-mind version. I like its word-flow better than the final version used for the title, but the words seemed a little too…suggestive?
I tried several variations, ultimately giving in to the joy of wordplay, and made the title version of the poem solely using “p” words!
Which version do you like better?



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