Twoku:
Lilies left / the stems bare, bereft / crestfallen.
Threeku:
Lilies gone / startled stems standing / left alone.
Fourku:
Day lilies / flowers now fallen / had their day.
Sometimes I get in a groove and the haikunifications keep flowingout of my fevered brain. Usually, I don’t post more than one extra version, which I call a “twoku” but this time, there are four worth posting (out of seven!), so we’ve got the main one, a Twoku, a Threeku and even a Fourku!
Do me a favor haiku lovers, wordsmiths and friends – please let me know which of the four you like most!


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