Twisted, hanging vine / the one she swung and clung to / cannot carry on.

Twoku: The vine held tightly / all last summer as she swung / lays lifeless on lawn.

Threeku: Twisted vine / last year’s screaming fun / swings no more.

Fourku: Swinging vine / last summer’s pleasure / is grounded.

Fiveku: The vine has fallen / that once carried my daughter / my unswung hero.

Sorry for the pun in the “Fiveku”…and to prove this vine is/was real, here’s a video of my daughter on it:

– The Haikook

03 Apr This entry was published on 2013/04/03 at 10:20 am. It’s filed under Children, Family, Farm & Rural, Feelings, Haiku, Nature, Spring and tagged child, daughter, fallen, fun, girl, grounded, Haiku, haikugrams, haikumages, NaPoWriMo, pleasure, summer, swing, swinging, swings, vine. Bookmark the permalink. Follow any comments here with the RSS feed for this post.

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