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Twisted, hanging vine / the one she swung and clung to / cannot carry on.

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Twoku: The vine held tightly / all last summer as she swung / lays lifeless on lawn.

Threeku: Twisted vine / last year’s screaming fun / swings no more.

Fourku: Swinging vine / last summer’s pleasure / is grounded.

Fiveku: The vine has fallen / that once carried my daughter / my unswung hero.

Sorry for the pun in the “Fiveku”…and to prove this vine is/was real, here’s a video of my daughter on it:

 – The Haikook

This entry was published on 2013/04/03 at 10:20 am. It’s filed under Children, Family, Farm & Rural, Feelings, Haiku, Nature, Spring and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. Follow any comments here with the RSS feed for this post.

2 thoughts on “Twisted, hanging vine / the one she swung and clung to / cannot carry on.

  1. I like threeku best – screaming fun implies so much! Thanks Haikook!

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  2. I like Threeku best. Screaming fun implies so much! Thanks Haikook!

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