Twoku:
A blue moon / may appear tonight / rarity.
Full again / second time this month / the blue moon.
// haikumages // ©russ murray
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“Haikumages” are short poems (mostly haiku and senryu-style) combined with images (mostly original photographs and graphics) by Russ Murray.
2 responses to “Full again / second time this month / the blue moon.”
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My riff on yours:
A blue moon/ may appear tonight/ once
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ha! you are writting Issa-style, ultra-minimalist…very nice! But, I would end with “…/ once again.” to get 3 syllables in there… It is actually a rare, but repeating phenomena! The blue is dependent on particulate matter in the air – and the size of the particles! Small is redder, larger particles make it blue – the bluest moon ever was seen after Krakatoa erupted… 🙂
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