Lights come on / telling dusk to let / the night fall.

Twoku: When the lights / come on as darkness / approaches.
Threeku: Relay race / dusk hands the baton / to nightfall.
Fourku: Lights come on / automatically / as night falls.

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carolee1945 says:

August 21, 2012 at 9:51 am

Once more!!! a beautiful pairing of photo with haiku, but I prefer your twoku—-

Lights come on/ telling dusk to let/ the night fall

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1. remurray says:
  
  August 21, 2012 at 6:02 pm
  
  Thanks! I agree…so clear in retrospect! 🙂
  
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