Twoku:
When the lights / come on as darkness / approaches.
Threeku:
Relay race / dusk hands the baton / to nightfall.
Fourku:
Lights come on / automatically / as night falls.
Lights come on / telling dusk to let / the night fall.
// haikumages // ©russ murray
“Haikumages” are short poems (mostly haiku and senryu-style) combined with images (mostly original photographs and graphics) by Russ Murray.
2 responses to “Lights come on / telling dusk to let / the night fall.”
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Once more!!! a beautiful pairing of photo with haiku, but I prefer your twoku—-
Lights come on/ telling dusk to let/ the night fall
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Thanks! I agree…so clear in retrospect! 🙂
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