Twoku: When the lights / come on as darkness / approaches.
Threeku: Relay race / dusk hands the baton / to nightfall.
Fourku: Lights come on / automatically / as night falls.
Twoku: When the lights / come on as darkness / approaches.
Threeku: Relay race / dusk hands the baton / to nightfall.
Fourku: Lights come on / automatically / as night falls.
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Once more!!! a beautiful pairing of photo with haiku, but I prefer your twoku—-
Lights come on/ telling dusk to let/ the night fall
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Thanks! I agree…so clear in retrospect! 🙂
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