Stump sits in clearing / lit by light never allowed / when it had branches.
Twoku: Stump in clearing lit / by light it never gave leave / to pass its branches.
Honestly, I love this second version – the “twoku” for this one – which is actually the last of five versions I wrote…but it’s a little convoluted in the language/meaning – what do you think?
This entry was published on 2012/07/27 at 11:11 am. It’s filed under Environment
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