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Tag Archive: open

31 Jul

Flower collapses / upon itself at dusk, waits / for sun’s bright return.

Twoku: Flower closed / at dusk, awaiting / sun’s return.
2012/07/31 at 11:11 am Leave a comment
12 Jul

Windows left open / overnight my car became / playground for spiders.

2012/07/12 at 11:11 am Leave a comment
16 Jun

Bud fallen too soon, dies / having lived only as an / unopened flower.

Twoku: Bud fallen / dies, living only / unopened.
2012/06/16 at 11:11 am Leave a comment
12 Jun

Still closed bud / hopes to be lovely / when open.

Twoku: Unopened flower / hopes to be as beautiful / as opened neighbor.  (The 5-7-5 original version…) NOTE: and yes, there’s a little bug on the bud…bugging his buddy Bud? …
2012/06/12 at 11:11 am Leave a comment