Twoku: Aged in cask / living, distilling / our spirits. (3-5-3) – the Haikook
Twoku: Birth day observance / anniversary of when / we were delivered. – the Haikook –
Twoku: My tired, time-blurred eyes / have led me to view the world / approximately. – the Haikook
Hmm…a grim image and haiku about aging. Eyes get old, often faster than the rest of our body’s organs and parts… 😦 – the Haikook
Twoku: Day arrives with frost / painted windows, metal, grass / all aged overnight.
Twoku: No surprise / brother still older / like last year.
Changed from “…tastes sweeter” to “…is sweeter.” Original: Nearing end / the wrinkled basil / tastes sweeter.
Twoku: Lilies left / the stems bare, bereft / crestfallen. Threeku: Lilies gone / startled stems standing / left alone. Fourku: Day lilies / flowers now fallen / had their…